this one was written by me ..

Dard ki panahon me gujarte hein jindagi
yeh na pucho bigadte hein yah sawartein hein jindagi
kehte hein tapkar sona aur nikhar aata hai
ham dard ki dhoop me nikahrte hein jindagi

thn my friend suggested some change
Dard ki panah me gujar jaati hain jindagi
yeh na pucho bigadti hai ya sawar hai jindagi
kehtein hein tapkar sona aur nikhar aata hai
yahan dard ki dhoop me nikar aati hai jindagi

just look the difference in the way we see it..i felt mine is mixed with anger and the second one is very gentle..thanks a lot to my friend who helped me to see this aspect of the poetry